Shot 1
After lying in bed= quiet/ serene
Music- non-diegetic nursery rhyme, reinforces innocence of protagonist
Editing- quick editing
Symbol- Katie frantically splashing water over her face, nightmare/ fear
CU/ MS

Shot 2
Violently being sick
Black and white editing to show that it has happened before
CU of facial expressions
Handheld camera
Non-diegetic music- darker, completely opposing music shown in shot 1

Lots of heavy breathing/ panic/ distress

Shot 3

GYM
Fast editing from last shot
Diegetic music, whatever Katie is listening to on her ipod (Unsigned band) when she takes it out of her ear, music volume decreases, heavy breathing kicks in
CU facial expressions
MS of Katie on the running machine
CU of Katie in the mirror
CU/ over the shoulder shot of Katie filling out her diary of how much weight she has lost

MS/ CU of Katie weighing herself on the scales

NARRATION/ VOICE OVER OF THE DIARY, SPEECH WRITTEN WITHIN DIARY TO CARRY ONTO SHOT 5

Shot 4

Katie coming home from gym
LS
CU of trainers on machine

Shot 5
Conversation around Denham
Steady shots talking
No music
Diegetic nature sounds
Medium paced editing- realistic

Shot 6
Katies facial expressions- fear of Becky's interrogation
CU
Shot reverse shot

Shot 7
Coming towards the shop
LS
Non-diegetic music- sad music
Diegetic music- door handle, door swinging open/ close, motorway traffic.

Shot 8
Walking into the shop
MS/LS
Medium paced editing

Shot 9
Katie looking at magazines
CU of what she is looking at
CU of facial expressions and the way she reacts to it

Shot 10
Becky encouraging Katie to stop looking at the magazines
CU of Becky's frustration

Shot 11
Katie getting annoyed
Shaking, gritting her teeth, almost crying


Shot 12
Walking out of shop in anger
LS/ CU of facial expressions
Non- diegetic sad music

Shot 13
Katie running off
LS- to isolate character, make her vunerable
sad music continued...
editing medium paced

Shot 14
CU of both Katie and Becky talking on the phone
Non- diegetic talking

Shot 15
Katie crying

Shot 16
Katie look of shock

SMOOTHER TRANSITION

Shot 17
Identical look of shock at the dinner table with a table full of food
CU of Katie and mothers facial expressions

Shot 18

Cutting through one item of food
Inside Katie's head= non-diegetic screaming pain, crying/ weeping
Black and white edited shot of her being sick

Shot 19
Argument with Mum, 'you don't understand'
CU walking up stairs, "I am going out"

Shot 20
Now focus on family, not Katie
Family do into her room LS
Looking in drawers for food CU/MS
Fast editing

Shot 21
sees her mum holding the food
Katie walks in "I came back to apologise and look at you"
mother 'I am so sorry darling, please don't be upset i just want the best for you'
Katie "You don't understand anything"

Shot 22
Katie laying on bed
CU of her with mum in background so that the audience get to see what the mum is doing

Shot 23
Mum taking diary out of bag, looking through whilst her mum is on the bed

Shot 24 = TWO OPTIONS
either filming the mum taking it out of Katie's room saying 'i will give you some alone time darling'

OR

katie turning around on the bed and seeing what her mum is looking at
CU anger
LS taking the diary from her, it rips
LS pushing her mum out of the room
Fast paced editing to reinforce momentum of argument

Shot 25

CU shot of her on the phone downstairs (change of scenery)
talking about Katie 'i thought it was about her breaking up with Daniel and exam stress, I just had no idea'
Transition fade to black

Shot 26

Mother dropping katie off at school
CU shots, awkard

Shot 27
Bell rings
in cafe, Katie and Emily in the cafe